Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Crime

         I think Calgary is a safe city because I haven’t seen any crime in Calgary so far. Calgary is safer than my hometown. I believe that crime hurts people. If people want to avoid crimes they shouldn’t do three things. The first things that people shouldn’t do it are walking alone at the late time. The second thing is carrying a valuable thing with you in public places. The third thing is talking with a strange people.

1 comment:

  1. Great organization in your paragraph! Those are all smart things to do.

    Corrections: "The first thing that people shouldn’t do is walking alone late at night." "The second thing is carrying valuable things with you in public places."

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